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You used a Go-Animate clip to make this? I would recommend using Flash next time.

AnimationOverload responds:

What's up with all you Flash-fanboys? I know, using Flash gives you the hope--that by doing so--you may get a girl to flash her level-3, vagina. Sadly, that isn't the case. Simply because, Flash is like a crusty old man. Meanwhile, Adobe Animate (or a 3d animation program that will actually get you a job, e.g. Blender or Maya) is like the new-kid-on-the-block who gets everyone free pussy and blow.

Seems like a newer form of animation, but it definitely didn't keep my attention. It seemed like it started off very slow, and lasted for far too long.

rostix responds:

Follow the previous chapters and maybe the story will be more interesting

This animation really could have used a lot more time dedicated to it. If this is your first animation, and you're putting it up to see how well you'll eventually improve, I'd tell you to go for it. However, this had a vague plot, and the animations seemed rather sloppy at points. I would definitely spend more time developing it next time, it seems like you have potential.

Really good job! I enjoyed the animation. It had a nice story with a cool little sound track to back it up. My only critique is that the music never really completely fit the emotion conveyed in the animation. Pretty good nonetheless!

It's like... Got alright graphics. Not too bad anyway. The animation is pretty choppy, but I'm sure you realize this. Voice acting is pretty horrendous, apart from the Newscaster who does a pretty alright job. If you need any voice actors, I strongly recommend using online resources such as the VoiceActingClub through their Proboards discussion board at: VoiceActingClub.proboards.com You could similarly find voice talent here on Newgrounds through it's own Voice Acting Alliance, though it's a little harder to find. In any case, I definitely see your animation potential, and I encourage you to continue making projects. Constantly be willing to learn and improve on your abilities and you'll definitely go far.

Not a bad animation, and the pictures were most definitely visually pleasing. Although there really wasn't too much of a story to it and I didn't find it that interesting to watch. You definitely have artistic skills, though!

Pretty good animation :P
I like the song :]

Pretty good animation :P
Wasn't as long as I had hoped though.

The Animation was really good :D
The voice acting, script, and plot line was a little dismal though.
It's not that it was bad, it just wasn't too interesting and didn't kept my attention.
Overall though, good job :]

Toby512 responds:

Thank you. :)

Pretty good animation.
Lol, I found some parts funny.
I felt like it was a little short though..

Well, I'm fairly new to newgrounds. I love it already. I can't believe I have a place to put all my music and Art! Too bad I don't make any animations ;[

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